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Alex Shifman's avatar

‘The woman threw back the window, gave me a smirk disguised as a smile’. I love how much you pack into this image. The whole piece has the feeling of a drum roll, tugging me down and down with her ‘oh fuck’ anxiety.

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Shannon McNamara's avatar

As someone who was SERIOUSLY HESITANT to share her writing, thank you!!

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Alex Shifman's avatar

Keep doing it. It’s effective work

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Colleen Bent's avatar

What a great story...I feel like I know you...or at least the morning you lol. Loved the line that your work place on the inside looked like lost souls might wander the halls at night. You have a fab sense of humor, I laughed out loud a few times. This was your Part 1. No Raise. No Job

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